Elevator Pitch No.2
17A- Elevator Pitch No.2
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=97Q6Bup5pPM&feature=youtu.be
Since I did not receive any feedback, I feel that my pitch
is very strong and just needed a few minor details added. My pitch is short and
sweet yet entices the consumer. Again since there was no feedback I didn’t consider
changing any big things.
Hi Melody!
ReplyDeleteI thought your elevator pitch was very well spoken and that you enunciated your words well! I was very impressed with how calmly you talked while still being strong with your words. The only thing that can be improved is the length of your elevator pitch! You could possibly add a hook to grab the audiences attention. Other than that, I thought you really nailed it!