Pitch No.3


·      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C0Bg1e7oYd0&feature=youtu.be

·      I did not receive any feedback on my first pitch, however on my second pitch I received one praising me for the way I presented myself, but stating it needed to be a bit longer.

·      On this final pitch I made it longer as well as restructured the content to a place where I believe there was a better flow. I believe this is the best pitch I gave for I represented my product well and mentioned the benefits it would have for the university and student body as a whole.




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  1. Alexandra Dorau's ENT3003 BlogApril 1, 2019 at 9:34 AM

    Hey Melody!
    Great job on your final elevator pitch! You were very calm throughout the process and you were very easy to understand. One thing I did notice while watching your elevator pitch is that you spent a lot more time reading your script than making eye contact with the camera, or the audience. This is something I would fix for your real in-person elevator pitch. Overall, great job!

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